Whippoorwill (rewritten)
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(04-28-2014, 01:14 AM)Bunx Wrote:  Really enjoyed this poem. The juxtaposition of the pre-urbanized landscape and the post is clear. I like that you didn't not add an emotional response to the environmental change, being not being positive or negative highlights the true subject of the poem.
Thank you for your feedback. With all the people (such as yourself) on this site who truly care, I am beginning to learn.
Thanks again,
R.T.
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Whippoorwill (rewritten) - by Thoughtjotter - 04-28-2014, 01:06 AM
RE: Whippoorwill (rewritten) - by Bunx - 04-28-2014, 01:14 AM
RE: Whippoorwill (rewritten) - by Thoughtjotter - 04-28-2014, 11:41 AM
RE: Whippoorwill (rewritten) - by tectak - 05-01-2014, 04:30 PM
RE: Whippoorwill (rewritten) - by Jinxy - 05-07-2014, 07:07 AM
RE: Whippoorwill (rewritten) - by tectak - 05-07-2014, 05:45 PM
RE: Whippoorwill (rewritten) - by bbcashdollar - 05-07-2014, 07:33 PM
RE: Whippoorwill (rewritten) - by ChristopherSea - 05-07-2014, 08:03 PM



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