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Whippoorwill (rewritten)
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04-28-2014, 01:14 AM
Really enjoyed this poem. The juxtaposition of the pre-urbanized landscape and the post is clear. I like that you didn't not add an emotional response to the environmental change, being not being positive or negative highlights the true subject of the poem.
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
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Whippoorwill (rewritten) - by Thoughtjotter - 04-28-2014, 01:06 AM
RE: Whippoorwill (rewritten) - by Bunx - 04-28-2014, 01:14 AM
RE: Whippoorwill (rewritten) - by Thoughtjotter - 04-28-2014, 11:41 AM
RE: Whippoorwill (rewritten) - by tectak - 05-01-2014, 04:30 PM
RE: Whippoorwill (rewritten) - by Jinxy - 05-07-2014, 07:07 AM
RE: Whippoorwill (rewritten) - by tectak - 05-07-2014, 05:45 PM
RE: Whippoorwill (rewritten) - by bbcashdollar - 05-07-2014, 07:33 PM
RE: Whippoorwill (rewritten) - by ChristopherSea - 05-07-2014, 08:03 PM
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