A Trip In Your Library
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I like your creative approach though it is a bit distracting from what seems to be a strong message/memory of an acid trip while lying on your back looking up through the trees seeking the natural meaning of life. Not that I resemble this poem or anything. There will be some discussions of rhythm and rhyme, meter and the use of caps. coming from others. Never give up your creativity but never give in to the wrong approach to learning how to use it.
Thanks for sharing,
R.T.
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A Trip In Your Library - by RiverNotch - 04-27-2014, 11:22 PM
RE: A Trip In Your Library - by Thoughtjotter - 04-27-2014, 11:59 PM
RE: A Trip In Your Library - by RiverNotch - 04-29-2014, 05:07 PM
RE: A Trip In Your Library - by Erthona - 04-29-2014, 03:32 AM
RE: A Trip In Your Library - by bena - 05-01-2014, 11:31 PM
RE: A Trip In Your Library - by RiverNotch - 05-03-2014, 06:42 PM



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