I Wished I Was The Water -edited
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Hi BedsideFungus, thanks for commenting. I'm glad you liked it as it was, I've taken your suggestions and changed wetly to slowly, and shining to moistened, which hopefully will be an improvement, Though I may yet change slowly to gently... still a work in progress so thanks for your input

Marianne
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I Wished I Was The Water -edited - by Mopkins - 04-06-2014, 07:44 PM
RE: The Shower - by ellajam - 04-06-2014, 10:15 PM
RE: The Shower - by Mopkins - 04-06-2014, 10:36 PM
RE: The Shower - by Thoughtjotter - 04-07-2014, 03:07 AM
RE: The Shower - by Mopkins - 04-07-2014, 03:24 AM
RE: The Shower - by Thoughtjotter - 04-07-2014, 05:10 AM
RE: The Shower - by California - 04-07-2014, 08:00 PM
RE: The Shower - by Mopkins - 04-07-2014, 08:47 PM
RE: The Shower - by California - 04-07-2014, 08:55 PM
RE: The Shower - by Mopkins - 04-07-2014, 09:04 PM
RE: The Shower - by Erthona - 04-07-2014, 10:33 PM
RE: The Shower - by kindofahippy - 04-07-2014, 10:47 PM
RE: The Shower - by Mopkins - 04-07-2014, 11:04 PM
RE: The Shower - by kindofahippy - 04-08-2014, 12:01 AM
RE: The Shower - by Mopkins - 04-08-2014, 12:19 AM
RE: The Shower -edited - by Mopkins - 04-25-2014, 02:24 PM
RE: The Shower -edited - by billy - 04-25-2014, 05:19 PM
RE: The Shower -edited - by Mopkins - 04-25-2014, 05:33 PM
RE: The Shower -edited - by shenaz - 04-25-2014, 06:32 PM
RE: The Shower -edited - by Mopkins - 04-25-2014, 06:37 PM
RE: I Wished I Was The Water -edited - by Mopkins - 04-26-2014, 01:08 PM
RE: I Wished I Was The Water -edited - by Mopkins - 04-30-2014, 12:38 PM



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