04-25-2014, 10:01 AM
this certainly does not suck monkey balls,
monkey balls and toe nail clippings, how much more original can you get than that. what i really liked about it was that i was in the room with you both, you made it real. thanks for the smile
monkey balls and toe nail clippings, how much more original can you get than that. what i really liked about it was that i was in the room with you both, you made it real. thanks for the smile
(04-22-2014, 12:48 PM)RSaba Wrote: Found amid the remnants of a late-night study session. Thought I'd share this weird nine-liner. Criticism always appreciated, although this (quite obviously) isn't serious at all, just a by-product of procrastination.
masterpiece
we were having
a beautiful conversation
and then you used the phrase:
"that sucks monkey balls"
and ruined my poem
damn you, i said
to the half-moon clippings
as i trimmed my nails at 2 am
this will never be a masterpiece now
