Masterpiece (scraps)
#10
Never belittle the absurd and ridiculous! I agree wholeheartedly with Ray -- this is a great poem, because only YOU could have written it. If only more people would realise that poetry is in the individual, not in trying to fit into some collective consciousness of cookie-cutter crap.

I enjoyed the fact that the "damn you" was addressed to the nail clippings and not the instigator of masterpiece failure, thus writing him off as insignificant and going on to produce something perfectly artistic anyway Smile
It could be worse
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Masterpiece (scraps) - by RSaba - 04-22-2014, 12:48 PM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by Brownlie - 04-22-2014, 01:25 PM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by RSaba - 04-22-2014, 01:57 PM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by ChristopherSea - 04-24-2014, 08:46 PM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by RSaba - 04-25-2014, 12:24 AM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by ChristopherSea - 04-25-2014, 12:33 AM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by ellajam - 04-25-2014, 12:39 AM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by RSaba - 04-25-2014, 04:20 AM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by rayheinrich - 04-25-2014, 06:37 AM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by Leanne - 04-25-2014, 06:49 AM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by rayheinrich - 04-25-2014, 08:10 AM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by billy - 04-25-2014, 10:01 AM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by RSaba - 04-25-2014, 01:36 PM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by RSaba - 04-26-2014, 11:48 PM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by leesharks - 04-30-2014, 12:36 AM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by RSaba - 04-30-2014, 02:29 PM



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