The Daimon -edited

[ChristopherSea]

I see that demon/daimon in you Marianne! The poem is a bit light on the subject, but that is fine. I will remember that every twitch is 'him'. The flow and rhymes makes for a smooth read. I found some pause with the line: 'Conversing with him’s simple'. Not in meter, just the odd 'him's'. However, it could just be me. Could you substitute something like: 'Chatting with him is simple,' while maintaining your meter? See what you think, cheers./Chris