10 years lost
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cosmicradical

Just a word of advice, the mods will probably not take that as adequate feedback. So in the future you might want to try and comment a little more about the poem outside of how it visually looks, and a vague comment about adding space.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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10 years lost - by Gestalt222 - 04-24-2014, 01:08 AM
RE: 10 years lost - by milo - 04-24-2014, 01:24 AM
RE: 10 years lost - by Erthona - 04-24-2014, 03:40 AM
RE: 10 years lost - by Erthona - 04-24-2014, 04:25 AM
RE: 10 years lost - by aerickson - 04-24-2014, 01:45 PM
RE: 10 years lost - by Gestalt222 - 04-25-2014, 01:52 AM
RE: 10 years lost - by 71degrees - 04-24-2014, 10:44 PM



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