04-23-2014, 03:03 PM
nice one Hippy Liked 'awful aura', and 'wrinkles danced over his face' - nicely done.
here's one I wrote when I was a moody teenager... surprised I could even remember it - but yours reminded me of it.
I shouldn’t look at mirrors
'cause the faces that are there
don’t ever tell me anything ,
they just return my stare.
And I shouldn’t ask them questions
‘cause they never do reply,
all they do is mimic and
they never tell me why.
But there seems to be no other way
to get me off my mind
so I gaze at nothing in the glass
and nothing’s all I find.
here's one I wrote when I was a moody teenager... surprised I could even remember it - but yours reminded me of it.
I shouldn’t look at mirrors
'cause the faces that are there
don’t ever tell me anything ,
they just return my stare.
And I shouldn’t ask them questions
‘cause they never do reply,
all they do is mimic and
they never tell me why.
But there seems to be no other way
to get me off my mind
so I gaze at nothing in the glass
and nothing’s all I find.