God is Dead
#6
I agree with ABH the last sentence is awkward.

"Now God is Dead and nought but Chance is here."

maybe "God is Dead and nothing but Chance is here."
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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God is Dead - by Am I A Poet? - 04-19-2014, 11:19 AM
RE: God is Dead - by Erthona - 04-19-2014, 11:35 AM
RE: God is Dead - by AnywherebutHere - 04-20-2014, 12:38 PM
RE: God is Dead - by alatos - 04-20-2014, 11:48 PM
RE: God is Dead - by Nbafan - 04-23-2014, 05:43 AM
RE: God is Dead - by Erthona - 04-23-2014, 01:24 PM
RE: God is Dead - by ChristopherSea - 04-23-2014, 07:59 PM
RE: God is Dead - by RiverNotch - 04-28-2014, 09:56 PM
RE: God is Dead - by ChristopherSea - 04-28-2014, 10:06 PM
RE: God is Dead - by RiverNotch - 04-28-2014, 10:27 PM
RE: God is Dead - by milo - 04-28-2014, 10:34 PM
RE: God is Dead - by ChristopherSea - 04-28-2014, 10:55 PM
RE: God is Dead - by rowens - 04-24-2014, 12:37 AM
RE: God is Dead - by Willpark - 04-28-2014, 11:26 AM
RE: God is Dead - by RiverNotch - 04-28-2014, 10:39 PM



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