Voice in the Light

[TheDoctorCam]

In the future, left-align your poems unless you are using a different alignment or no alignment for a fundamental reason. Center aligned poems make great 5th grade projects, but left align allows a clearer view of the lines, line breaks, and whitespace.

I'm not the most experienced critique, the aforementioned advice and analysis from the commenters above should suffice in revision. Just wanted to share that tip of alignment.

Thanks for the poem to read and take care!