Sometimes I Feel

[Nbafan]

Sometimes in life I feel,
That I struggle to know what's real.
I see a darker shade in the distance,
I look over to reach and to touch,
but it fades away out my clutch.
I still go back to that place daily.
Looking and speaking to the sky,
people walk by and ask me why.
But i don't have to explain,
what happened to me and my brain.

To me, this is just too choppy and, as someone else said, the rhymes seem forced. Honestly, I would suggest going for a good flow over rhyme. Rhyme can be good but it is hardly a necessity and, 'prose' poetry is increasingly common.