NaPM April 17 2014
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(04-23-2014, 03:18 AM)cidermaid Wrote:  
(04-22-2014, 09:26 PM)Keith Wrote:  Makes Jack a dull boy
Keith just wanted to say how much i enjoyed this one, in particular the first stanza and the gentle aspect of the regrets. You really hooked me in with the second line - peachy Thumbsup
Many thanks AJ this has to be by far my biggest regret, I'm off sick todayBig Grin so just catching up on some missed days over the easter hols. you are writting some great stuff and we are on the home straight Smile how much fun is this Thumbsup

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NaPM April 17 2014 - by milo - 04-17-2014, 10:06 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by Erthona - 04-18-2014, 02:46 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by Brownlie - 04-18-2014, 03:07 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-18-2014, 04:35 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by cidermaid - 04-18-2014, 07:02 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ellajam - 04-18-2014, 07:05 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-18-2014, 09:01 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by cidermaid - 04-18-2014, 09:41 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-18-2014, 09:53 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by Mopkins - 04-19-2014, 12:40 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by Keith - 04-22-2014, 09:26 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by cidermaid - 04-23-2014, 03:18 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by Keith - 04-23-2014, 03:37 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by fim - 04-27-2014, 12:14 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ellajam - 04-28-2014, 10:16 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-28-2014, 10:57 PM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by fim - 04-29-2014, 02:05 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ellajam - 04-29-2014, 02:19 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by jacobfionn - 04-29-2014, 02:58 AM
RE: NaPM April 17 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-29-2014, 08:55 PM



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