Masterpiece (scraps)
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Found amid the remnants of a late-night study session. Thought I'd share this weird nine-liner. Criticism always appreciated, although this (quite obviously) isn't serious at all, just a by-product of procrastination. Smile

masterpiece

we were having
a beautiful conversation
and then you used the phrase:
"that sucks monkey balls"
and ruined my poem
damn you, i said
to the half-moon clippings
as i trimmed my nails at 2 am
this will never be a masterpiece now
Let's put Rowdy on top of the TV and see which one of us can throw a hat on him first. Thumbsup feedback award
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Masterpiece (scraps) - by RSaba - 04-22-2014, 12:48 PM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by Brownlie - 04-22-2014, 01:25 PM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by RSaba - 04-22-2014, 01:57 PM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by ChristopherSea - 04-24-2014, 08:46 PM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by RSaba - 04-25-2014, 12:24 AM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by ChristopherSea - 04-25-2014, 12:33 AM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by ellajam - 04-25-2014, 12:39 AM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by RSaba - 04-25-2014, 04:20 AM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by rayheinrich - 04-25-2014, 06:37 AM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by Leanne - 04-25-2014, 06:49 AM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by rayheinrich - 04-25-2014, 08:10 AM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by billy - 04-25-2014, 10:01 AM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by RSaba - 04-25-2014, 01:36 PM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by RSaba - 04-26-2014, 11:48 PM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by leesharks - 04-30-2014, 12:36 AM
RE: Masterpiece (scraps) - by RSaba - 04-30-2014, 02:29 PM



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