By the Rim of My Shadow 2
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Shocked 
OK, so I read the comments, and took note. I appreciate them.
I tried to make it less cryptic, (maybe it still is),
I'm still trying to figure it out...Undecided
cheers,
here it is:

By the rim of my shadow,
a sparrow undressed,
its feathers like diamonds,
to each one of my dreams.

One was the night,
it held me prisoner,
so despicable and unkind,
I trembled in silence,
it was all here,
all mine.

Then I saw the earth,
howling like thunder,
walked drunk to the wicked daylight,
-come in- she said,
I cleared my way through the dead ones,
-now go away-
-just go away-

And there I found the Caesar,
his head rolling up-down,
like a tale of my nightmares,
his rattled bones,
his cold sweat.
it was all there,
it was all ours.

By the rim of my shadow,
a bitter taste arrives.
¡Mad sparrow,
awake me!
I feel the edge
the cold arrow-sound,
it burns,
and it's calling a name,
my name.
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By the Rim of My Shadow 2 - by Gena - 04-22-2014, 10:45 AM
RE: By the Rim of My Shadow 2 - by RSaba - 04-22-2014, 10:58 AM
RE: By the Rim of My Shadow 2 - by ChristopherSea - 04-22-2014, 06:28 PM



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