Calmer Waters

[ellajam]

Hey,

I like your reading! It's interesting that it comes across that way. You were bang on about the little swimmers

I'll definitely take those comments into consideration. Thanks so much for the positivity. I was scared I'd be ripped apart

Fret not, I definitely will. Thanks again!

Round here, if people are interested enough to rip your poems apart you're in good shape. They often improve when you put them back together.