04-22-2014, 08:06 AM
No problem! I do think you should keep the fish (and not just because the first poem I ever wrote was about fish). Just find a way to show the reader what they actually represent.
Don't worry about textbook poetry! Dive into (pun again) some of the stuff here, I think you'll find it useful when trying to find a caps/punctuation style.
Don't worry about textbook poetry! Dive into (pun again) some of the stuff here, I think you'll find it useful when trying to find a caps/punctuation style.
Let's put Rowdy on top of the TV and see which one of us can throw a hat on him first. 
