04-22-2014, 07:18 AM
Robert,
Nice freshness.
The line "Am I a conduit to what they are?" seems a bit redundant, and self serving.
Please do not cap the beginning of every line unless it is the start of a sentence.
Outside of those things, this is a fine first effort.
Dale
Nice freshness.
The line "Am I a conduit to what they are?" seems a bit redundant, and self serving.
Please do not cap the beginning of every line unless it is the start of a sentence.
Outside of those things, this is a fine first effort.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.