04-22-2014, 05:27 AM
(04-22-2014, 05:23 AM)milo Wrote:That's what the poem's about for me, it's not mom's long life that's preferable.(04-21-2014, 05:29 PM)Erthona Wrote: It's a true story from somewhere, but as Milo would say they all die, some sooner than others, no big deal.Everyone dies from something, cancer is something. There is a general consensus that a longer life is a better life but I doubt the veracity of that.
Ray, drop the "that's" in L4 if you want to smooth out that line.
Dale
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