04-22-2014, 04:36 AM
Hello everyone,
this is my first post ever. I'd like to know what do you think of my poem (if you can call it 'poem'). I don't know...I don't show this to many people, so here it goes... greetings.
By the rim of my shadow,
clockwise,
tender skin,
each feather of the sparrow holds a dream,
my dream.
The night yearns for prisoners,
despicable,
unkind,
steel ashes,
magnolias,
all here,
all mine.
Feel the earth howl like thunder,
wicked daylight,
come in,
clear up the way for the dead ones,
go away,
go away.
Rattled beat for the Caesar,
sweet deception,
unite,
heaven up-down,
secure us,
all here,
all ours.
By the rim of my shadow,
unpleasant,
insane,
every edge,
every arrow has a name,
my name.
this is my first post ever. I'd like to know what do you think of my poem (if you can call it 'poem'). I don't know...I don't show this to many people, so here it goes... greetings.
By the rim of my shadow,
clockwise,
tender skin,
each feather of the sparrow holds a dream,
my dream.
The night yearns for prisoners,
despicable,
unkind,
steel ashes,
magnolias,
all here,
all mine.
Feel the earth howl like thunder,
wicked daylight,
come in,
clear up the way for the dead ones,
go away,
go away.
Rattled beat for the Caesar,
sweet deception,
unite,
heaven up-down,
secure us,
all here,
all ours.
By the rim of my shadow,
unpleasant,
insane,
every edge,
every arrow has a name,
my name.