Go on sad one
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"My main issue with this poem is that I know you are capable of going into greater depth with your content."

That is true, but not my intent. It is from a series of poems called the "Song of Enoch" Here is another one on this site if you wish to look at it.

The Land of Nod

Thanks for your comments

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Go on sad one - by Erthona - 04-17-2014, 10:35 AM
RE: Go one sad one - by Mopkins - 04-17-2014, 05:17 PM
RE: Go one sad one - by Erthona - 04-17-2014, 09:16 PM
RE: Go one sad one - by Mopkins - 04-17-2014, 09:30 PM
RE: Go one sad one - by ellajam - 04-17-2014, 09:30 PM
RE: Go on sad one - by Erthona - 04-18-2014, 11:04 AM
RE: Go on sad one - by Stephanie - 04-18-2014, 05:01 PM
RE: Go on sad one - by Namyh - 04-20-2014, 03:12 AM
RE: Go on sad one - by Erthona - 04-20-2014, 07:07 AM
RE: Go on sad one - by Stephanie - 04-20-2014, 03:37 PM
RE: Go on sad one - by Erthona - 04-20-2014, 05:25 PM
RE: Go on sad one - by Brownlie - 04-20-2014, 08:35 PM
RE: Go on sad one - by Erthona - 04-21-2014, 10:43 AM
RE: Go on sad one - by Brownlie - 04-21-2014, 03:12 PM
RE: Go on sad one - by Erthona - 04-21-2014, 04:30 PM



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