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[Erthona]

I suppose I could remove the "then so it would read:

If only you had the talent to be bold, others you would inspire

otherwise

You could inspire other if you had the talent to be bold.

Of course that makes no sense, you would have to take out talent and replace it with something like courage.

You could inspire others if you had the courage to be bold.
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If you had the talent, you could entertain people with music.

or

You could entertain people with music if you had the talent.
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After considering all of this I do think it would work better to say "could" rather than "would"

Thanks for the suggestion.

Dale