random stuff
#3
"Pastures" should have a little "p"

L5 "A" should be "a"

As one assumes "tufts" refers to grass, this could probably do without the "colored"

Overall, a solid write.


Dale
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random stuff - by Brownlie - 04-16-2014, 02:38 PM
RE: random stuff - by RSaba - 04-21-2014, 05:43 AM
RE: random stuff - by Erthona - 04-21-2014, 06:41 AM
RE: random stuff - by Brownlie - 04-21-2014, 07:19 AM



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