God is Dead
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I personally do not enjoy missing words to create an era, like the first sentence needs a "the" and the last sentence, does not sit well, "Now God is Dead and nought but Chance is here." it isn't clear to me.
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God is Dead - by Am I A Poet? - 04-19-2014, 11:19 AM
RE: God is Dead - by Erthona - 04-19-2014, 11:35 AM
RE: God is Dead - by AnywherebutHere - 04-20-2014, 12:38 PM
RE: God is Dead - by alatos - 04-20-2014, 11:48 PM
RE: God is Dead - by Nbafan - 04-23-2014, 05:43 AM
RE: God is Dead - by Erthona - 04-23-2014, 01:24 PM
RE: God is Dead - by ChristopherSea - 04-23-2014, 07:59 PM
RE: God is Dead - by RiverNotch - 04-28-2014, 09:56 PM
RE: God is Dead - by ChristopherSea - 04-28-2014, 10:06 PM
RE: God is Dead - by RiverNotch - 04-28-2014, 10:27 PM
RE: God is Dead - by milo - 04-28-2014, 10:34 PM
RE: God is Dead - by ChristopherSea - 04-28-2014, 10:55 PM
RE: God is Dead - by rowens - 04-24-2014, 12:37 AM
RE: God is Dead - by Willpark - 04-28-2014, 11:26 AM
RE: God is Dead - by RiverNotch - 04-28-2014, 10:39 PM



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