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Objects
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04-20-2014, 11:00 AM
I second all of Am I a Poet?'s notes, and would note, too, that her critique hits heaviest toward the end, which is a flag I was throwing, too. I'd argue the praise in my macro comment was echoed as well.
This poem is a keeper, but it might turn out to be a long way from "done." |
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Objects - by kindofahippy - 04-20-2014, 12:32 AM
RE: Objects - by crow - 04-20-2014, 08:32 AM
RE: Objects - by Am I A Poet? - 04-20-2014, 08:54 AM
RE: Objects - by crow - 04-20-2014, 11:00 AM
RE: Objects - by milo - 04-21-2014, 04:01 AM
RE: Objects - by kindofahippy - 04-21-2014, 02:00 PM
RE: Objects - by milo - 04-22-2014, 06:37 AM
RE: Objects - by kindofahippy - 04-22-2014, 11:27 AM
RE: Objects - by tectak - 04-22-2014, 08:45 PM
RE: Objects - by crow - 04-23-2014, 11:19 AM
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