Feral
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(04-18-2014, 08:19 PM)ChristopherSea Wrote:  a 'non-ku'

Feral

mottled gray scoundrel
wanders serpentine alley
to bemire a queen
Hi Chris, great short poem you've got here. I especially like that middle line with it's feline like swagger. For some reason I thought serpentine alley was a reference to "Turpentine Alley" but after Googling, it would seem that "Turpentine Alley" is a place that I have invented.
I'm far happier with cats bemiring queens than bemiring my garden.
Cheers for the read.
feedback award wae aye man ye radgie
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Messages In This Thread
Feral - by ChristopherSea - 04-18-2014, 08:19 PM
RE: Feral - by Brownlie - 04-19-2014, 03:27 AM
RE: Feral - by ChristopherSea - 04-19-2014, 03:43 AM
RE: Feral - by Magpie - 04-20-2014, 09:10 AM
RE: Feral - by ChristopherSea - 04-21-2014, 06:32 PM



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