Go on sad one

Go on sad one

Namyh

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04-20-2014, 03:12 AM

Erthona - I enjoyed the beauty and craft of your words. I would offer one suggestion for clarity without losing the beat:

"For don’t you know
What is your place?
When pain inside
still smiles the face."

Good work E. Namyh

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Go on sad one - by Erthona - 04-17-2014, 10:35 AM

RE: Go one sad one - by Mopkins - 04-17-2014, 05:17 PM

RE: Go one sad one - by Erthona - 04-17-2014, 09:16 PM

RE: Go one sad one - by Mopkins - 04-17-2014, 09:30 PM

RE: Go one sad one - by ellajam - 04-17-2014, 09:30 PM

RE: Go on sad one - by Erthona - 04-18-2014, 11:04 AM

RE: Go on sad one - by Stephanie - 04-18-2014, 05:01 PM

RE: Go on sad one - by Namyh - 04-20-2014, 03:12 AM

RE: Go on sad one - by Erthona - 04-20-2014, 07:07 AM

RE: Go on sad one - by Stephanie - 04-20-2014, 03:37 PM

RE: Go on sad one - by Erthona - 04-20-2014, 05:25 PM

RE: Go on sad one - by Brownlie - 04-20-2014, 08:35 PM

RE: Go on sad one - by Erthona - 04-21-2014, 10:43 AM

RE: Go on sad one - by Brownlie - 04-21-2014, 03:12 PM

RE: Go on sad one - by Erthona - 04-21-2014, 04:30 PM

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