Of Whippoorwills and the Truth

[poe]

First of all I have always loved the name of that bird. That hooked me from the get. I think you should add an "and" to connect L2 with L3, for flow. I 'll assume the question marks are a typo. Be more careful, please. The use of repetition, "over, and over, and over, to mimic the call of the whippoorwill, works for me. I especially like the second to last line as if the whippoorwill is admonishing you with that repetition, about having more than you deserve. The humility there is an effective and strong close to the piece.