The Mood Swing
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(04-19-2014, 05:59 PM)John Galt Wrote:  Try to think rationally, for instance you would not "pluck" each letter to "clear your name".
You would "Answer" each letter to clear your name.

Be consistent to everyday life; no one speaks in the way that you have written this piece,
I suspect you did it for "poetic effect" but it has the opposite effect.

seeya. JG
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The Mood Swing - by poe - 04-19-2014, 08:42 AM
RE: The Mood Swing - by Erthona - 04-19-2014, 11:54 AM
RE: The Mood Swing - by poe - 04-19-2014, 12:18 PM
RE: The Mood Swing - by John Galt - 04-19-2014, 05:59 PM
RE: The Mood Swing - by poe - 04-19-2014, 10:18 PM
RE: The Mood Swing - by RSaba - 04-21-2014, 05:57 AM



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