HMS Metaphor (Apologies to G and S, and from S Fry)

[tectak]

Hi, I enjoy this with each read, but that sand always sticks for me. It's a wet, windy voyage and I never know where all that blowing sand comes from. "we near die" and "enough to through" are a bit twisted. Still, a fun read.

Hi ella,
Yep...it's in fun but in serious!
We near die...hmmm....a near death experience...he was near dead when we found him...scrapes through? Or not?
Sand...yes...too keen on linking Sandman to shifting sand-bars, though dunes DO appear in the sea and move with the wind. Check out Dune de Pyla, west coast France
"Enough to through the..." is poor. I will work on that. Did you get the third line/first line next stanza rhyme scheme....I know you like these twisters.
Best,
tectak