04-18-2014, 06:09 PM
Hi, Tony, welcome.
I'd rethink wet stockings, come up with something fresher. I like the slow pace. Lazy butterfly made me think, led me to one still damp from it's emergence, though I don't know that rebirth was what you had in mind.
I'd rethink wet stockings, come up with something fresher. I like the slow pace. Lazy butterfly made me think, led me to one still damp from it's emergence, though I don't know that rebirth was what you had in mind.
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