HMS Metaphor (Apologies to G and S, and from S Fry)
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HMS Metaphor (Apologies to G and S, and from S Fry)
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04-18-2014, 05:48 PM
Hi, I enjoy this with each read, but that sand always sticks for me. It's a wet, windy voyage and I never know where all that blowing sand comes from. "we near die" and "enough to through" are a bit twisted. Still, a fun read.
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HMS Metaphor (Apologies to G and S, and from S Fry) - by tectak - 04-12-2014, 05:59 PM
RE: HMS Metaphor (Apologies to G and S, and from S Fry) - by Erthona - 04-13-2014, 03:55 AM
RE: HMS Metaphor (Apologies to G and S, and from S Fry) - by Erthona - 04-18-2014, 11:15 AM
RE: HMS Metaphor (Apologies to G and S, and from S Fry) - by tectak - 04-18-2014, 03:39 PM
RE: HMS Metaphor (Apologies to G and S, and from S Fry) - by ellajam - 04-18-2014, 05:48 PM
RE: HMS Metaphor (Apologies to G and S, and from S Fry) - by tectak - 04-18-2014, 06:46 PM
RE: HMS Metaphor (Apologies to G and S, and from S Fry) - by ellajam - 04-18-2014, 07:44 PM
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