HMS Metaphor (Apologies to G and S, and from S Fry)

[tectak]

Sorry if I ruined this for more critiquing, maybe bumping it to the top will help.

Dale

Blame not thyself, for by such chastisement the guilty happy go...
I think I said that at school when the principal used that wonderful disclaimer before. a caning session...I blame myself, and this will hurt me more than it hurts you.
...if work languishes in serious workshopping I assume its fully cooked...you do, however, get an Hon. Mention in Fun, Unclear Physics and Canton Theory, so we have not fallen out.
Best and thanks,
tectak
(It was a Grammar Scool....we all talked like that!)