Wanderers, Part One

[kindofahippy]

Mopkins,

Thanks for your thoughts, that gives me something to chew on. I've wanted to write ambiguous poetry that has one meaning to me, but that could just as easily mean something else to a different reader. It's intended to be vague, it's an attempt to write on a harsh subject so that the actual meaning isn't obvious. It looks like that only detracts from the content, though. Maybe I would do well to practice meter without rhyme at this point in my writing.