To my Self
#3
Hello AIAP. I have no inclination to keep trying to figure out what is going on. Why?
because I know that there will be no reward for my brain.
There is nothing within the poem to stimulate my senses.

What is a "benevolent light"?

Who has "won" and "lost" is it god? or maybe your conscience?

I am not sure if "presumed" Line 1 verse 3 makes sense in the context it is used here. It struck me as odd anyway.

Welcome. JG.
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To my Self - by Am I A Poet? - 04-18-2014, 02:17 AM
RE: To my Self - by Erthona - 04-18-2014, 03:16 AM
RE: To my Self - by Am I A Poet? - 04-18-2014, 04:52 AM
RE: To my Self - by John Galt - 04-18-2014, 04:09 AM
RE: To my Self - by Erthona - 04-18-2014, 08:08 AM
RE: To my Self - by Am I A Poet? - 04-18-2014, 09:15 AM



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