NaPM April 16 2014

Hello There, Guest! Register

WILL ALL MEMBERS PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK BEFORE POSTING A POEM IN ANY OF THE MAIN WORKSHOPS.

NaPM April 16 2014

Brownlie Offline

Offline

WTF

Posts: 574
Threads: 80
Joined: May 2013

#11

04-17-2014, 07:58 AM

(04-17-2014, 04:07 AM)ellajam Wrote: Walter

He gave his spirit full command,
directing it with deft control.
When life asked him to take a stand
he gave his spirit full command
but listened with his heart in hand,
and when death came to claim his soul
he gave his spirit full command,
directing it with deft control.

(meh, first try at triolet)

My first inkling was that this poem sounded pretty good. So that's a good sign.

Reply

« Next Oldest | Next Newest »

Messages In This Thread

NaPM April 16 2014 - by milo - 04-16-2014, 10:48 PM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by Mopkins - 04-17-2014, 12:41 AM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-17-2014, 01:45 AM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by Erthona - 04-17-2014, 02:03 AM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by ellajam - 04-17-2014, 04:07 AM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-17-2014, 04:20 AM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by ellajam - 04-17-2014, 04:25 AM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by milo - 04-17-2014, 05:29 AM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by Brownlie - 04-17-2014, 07:58 AM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by ellajam - 04-17-2014, 08:20 AM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by justcloudy - 04-17-2014, 04:41 AM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by Keith - 04-17-2014, 06:48 AM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by Brownlie - 04-17-2014, 01:41 PM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by cidermaid - 04-17-2014, 05:25 PM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by fim - 04-17-2014, 11:27 PM

Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)