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NaPM April 16 2014

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04-17-2014, 05:29 AM

(04-17-2014, 04:07 AM)ellajam Wrote: Walter

He gave his spirit full command,
directing it with deft control.
When life asked him to take a stand
he gave his spirit full command
but listened with his heart in hand,
and when death came to claim his soul
he gave his spirit full command,
directing it with deft control.

(meh, first try at triolet)

I have always loved triolets and this one is pretty solid. You managed the turns well. Nice job.

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NaPM April 16 2014 - by milo - 04-16-2014, 10:48 PM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by Mopkins - 04-17-2014, 12:41 AM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-17-2014, 01:45 AM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by Erthona - 04-17-2014, 02:03 AM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by ellajam - 04-17-2014, 04:07 AM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by ChristopherSea - 04-17-2014, 04:20 AM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by ellajam - 04-17-2014, 04:25 AM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by milo - 04-17-2014, 05:29 AM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by Brownlie - 04-17-2014, 07:58 AM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by ellajam - 04-17-2014, 08:20 AM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by justcloudy - 04-17-2014, 04:41 AM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by Keith - 04-17-2014, 06:48 AM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by Brownlie - 04-17-2014, 01:41 PM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by cidermaid - 04-17-2014, 05:25 PM

RE: NaPM April 16 2014 - by fim - 04-17-2014, 11:27 PM

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