04-17-2014, 02:56 AM
(04-17-2014, 01:23 AM)Stephanie Wrote: Interesting to see how someone else would complete the lines although it moves the poem away from my intention. Also interesting to see the feedback here in direct conflict with the feedback I received elsewhere. I guess that is the trouble with these things, it's all quite personal. Editing poems is something I really struggle with as I never know who I should be listening to, I suppose that gets easier with experience or at least I hope it does!!So you agree that the lines seem incomplete? Your intention is perfectly valid and I don't want to imply that the lines MUST be completed in my, or anyone's, way. As a criticism of the form, only you can decide whether or not to take note...all is opinion...but what will be apparent on this site is that most of us who give our opinion, do so honestly...and that may explain the difference between this site and the "others" which you refer to.
Best,
tectak