04-17-2014, 02:17 AM
(04-17-2014, 12:32 AM)Stephanie Wrote: If you read my first message I said I was TRYING to go for something simple not that I had managed to achieve it. I am trying to because as I also said it is something I am struggling with at the moment. Mentioning it is certainly not intended to make anyone feel stupid, I am not sure why you would think that, it was only to say that it's what I am working on at the moment. And no there is no lesson, it's just a poem about the journey to and from a funeral and the tension release experienced on the way home.Stephanie: I hear you. I actually love funeral poems. And I like this one. The last sentence of your response to me says it all. I guess I just wanted a chance to see that for myself without a disclaimer. Shades a response, I think.
Please don't give up on this. Your brother response to the funeral is fascinating.