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Funeral
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04-17-2014, 01:23 AM
Interesting to see how someone else would complete the lines although it moves the poem away from my intention. Also interesting to see the feedback here in direct conflict with the feedback I received elsewhere. I guess that is the trouble with these things, it's all quite personal. Editing poems is something I really struggle with as I never know who I should be listening to, I suppose that gets easier with experience or at least I hope it does!!
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Funeral - by Stephanie - 04-16-2014, 02:50 PM
RE: Funeral - by 71degrees - 04-16-2014, 11:35 PM
RE: Funeral - by Stephanie - 04-17-2014, 12:32 AM
RE: Funeral - by 71degrees - 04-17-2014, 02:17 AM
RE: Funeral - by ChristopherSea - 04-17-2014, 12:59 AM
RE: Funeral - by tectak - 04-17-2014, 01:02 AM
RE: Funeral - by Stephanie - 04-17-2014, 01:23 AM
RE: Funeral - by tectak - 04-17-2014, 02:56 AM
RE: Funeral - by ellajam - 04-17-2014, 03:24 AM
RE: Funeral - by ellajam - 04-17-2014, 02:00 AM
RE: Funeral - by Stephanie - 04-17-2014, 02:10 AM
RE: Funeral - by Stephanie - 04-17-2014, 02:47 AM
RE: Funeral - by Stephanie - 04-17-2014, 03:09 AM
RE: Funeral - by John Galt - 04-17-2014, 05:27 AM
RE: Funeral - by Todd - 04-17-2014, 07:30 AM
RE: Funeral - by Stephanie - 04-17-2014, 04:05 PM
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