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By the Number
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04-16-2014, 06:28 PM
I have seen a couple similar 'semi-found' poems before. Although the true factoids are sometimes braided with poetic strophes that are more related, I find the contrasting vignettes achieved herein effective as is the switch from tragedy to love in the close. I have a small nit with the 'even more...' in the final line. Somehow the change from frequency to intensity seems off, but it is probably me.
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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By the Number - by 71degrees - 04-16-2014, 02:10 AM
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RE: By the Number - by ChristopherSea - 04-16-2014, 06:28 PM
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RE: By the Number - by billy - 04-17-2014, 08:28 PM
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