04-15-2014, 07:59 PM
(04-15-2014, 07:03 PM)justcloudy Wrote: Stowawayjust cloudy, My daughter pulled off this same stunt and scared us half to death. We had informed the store and they placed a sales person at the only exit. Five minutes later our little one called out from within one of those clothing rack rounds you write of. You naughty girls! It was a harrowing experience for us all. Your poem vividly evoked that sinking feeling and time dilation (it seemed like an hour).
Circular racks of Walmart clothes
made the best hiding places
when big brother was seeking.
Inside I was invisible, invincible.
The carpet smelled dusty as I sat
on the iron X in the center
fingering the different fabrics in turn.
One time he never found me.
My tummy grew heavy and hot
once I crawled out and found the cart gone.
I panted, glued to a pole in the center
of the plus sized women’s clothes,
till a man in a blue polo told me to follow him.
He had a yellow-faced pin like the stickers the old lady
gave us after mom paid, reaching from her wheelchair.
After plodding light-headed for years I spied layaway
and my red-faced mom.
Well done/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris

