Lover Under Construction

[ChristopherSea]

Is this helpful?

https://db.tt/pMVIpZlk

It's a crappy reading, but maybe it'll be useful.

Crow, Thanks for looking the poem over, especially if you recorded a reading of it. Unfortunately, the link comes up with an error from this end./Chris

Hi Chris,
Have you put this one to bed? I don't want to wake it if is sleeping peacefully but there are one or two nits that you could say need a scratch...or I could, rather. I refer, of course, to edit 2.
Get back,
tectak

No Tom, it is as wide awake as I am. Any comments or nit-picks are welcome. Thanks for the look and offer./Chris