04-14-2014, 04:18 AM
Many thanks, Todd. I know that bastard Phelps was on my mind when I wrote this as it was only a day or so after his death (or after I read of and celebrated his impending demise, which came nice and quickly), and while that wasn't my primary intent it's no doubt found its way in there.
Just because it makes sense, I will change one "and" break (the last one) but I will keep the first as I want the strongest emphasis on "breakfast" in that line, and I want the previous one to tail off. I'll rearrange that last stanza but I won't break on "onion" as it's important it stay next to Golgotha. Shall play. Merci beaucoup.
Just because it makes sense, I will change one "and" break (the last one) but I will keep the first as I want the strongest emphasis on "breakfast" in that line, and I want the previous one to tail off. I'll rearrange that last stanza but I won't break on "onion" as it's important it stay next to Golgotha. Shall play. Merci beaucoup.
It could be worse