The Red Dream

[kamirakara]

Maybe not children at bedtime, around the campfire, heck yea. Stephen King would be proud of this.
Reading aloud helps me to smooth out the ruff places in my poems sometimes. Making it rhyme, pardon, letting it rhyme will come with practice. I also look forward to that day. You have a blessed imagination and you are in the best place to learn, so many great coaches here.
Can't wait to see the rewrite and please, save the little bunnies.

Next time, R.T.

Thank you!!! I'm working on the rewrite now, but as English is not my native language it is a little hard for me to hear what sounds forced, which is why I am truly grateful for you guys!