Black Widow
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(04-01-2014, 01:56 AM)LV Moose Wrote:  She sits amid her silken treads,
hapless victims to ensnare.
An hourglass portends their fate,
a widows kiss awaits them there.


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Fire away. I know poems don't have to rhyme, it just worked out that way. One minor thing I'm not sure of... "a" or "the" to begin the last line?
Of course, I expect major things as well Smile

Thanks,

Moose
See Robert Frost's Design. Maybe you already have but its got a spider in it.
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Messages In This Thread
Black Widow - by LV Moose - 04-01-2014, 01:56 AM
RE: Black Widow - by Erthona - 04-01-2014, 02:23 PM
RE: Black Widow - by LV Moose - 04-01-2014, 11:41 PM
RE: Black Widow - by JakMak - 04-12-2014, 11:49 PM
RE: Black Widow - by tectak - 04-13-2014, 01:08 AM
RE: Black Widow - by LV Moose - 04-13-2014, 10:45 PM
RE: Black Widow - by tectak - 04-15-2014, 05:57 PM
RE: Black Widow - by Brownlie - 04-13-2014, 01:18 AM
RE: Black Widow - by John Galt - 04-14-2014, 03:24 AM
RE: Black Widow - by JakMak - 04-15-2014, 06:35 PM
RE: Black Widow - by LV Moose - 04-16-2014, 12:07 AM



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