The Doctrine Pedlar -edited

[Mopkins]

Gee thanks Leanne, I appreciate you smoothing out the bumps for me. I hope it didn't take you too long. I like your substitutions - this poems been in this form for so long it's hard to edit it properly and I'm still pretty clueless when it comes to meter. I might keep the capitals- it's my way of showing the pomposity of the pedlar. Other than that I'll take all your changes with humble gratitude.

Thank you once again for fixing it up - it's much appreciated.

Marianne