04-12-2014, 08:21 AM
Gee thanks Leanne, I appreciate you smoothing out the bumps for me. I hope it didn't take you too long. I like your substitutions - this poems been in this form for so long it's hard to edit it properly and I'm still pretty clueless when it comes to meter. I might keep the capitals- it's my way of showing the pomposity of the pedlar. Other than that I'll take all your changes with humble gratitude.
Thank you once again for fixing it up - it's much appreciated.
Marianne
Thank you once again for fixing it up - it's much appreciated.
Marianne

