04-12-2014, 03:18 AM
BTW Sonnets with this rhyme pattern are generally written in iambic pentameter(IP), why in the world would you put two lines of trochee in every other set of double lines. Did someone tell you that is what a sonnet is? If so you should go and beat them soundly. Oh yes, not getting to use words you want is par for the course with sonnets.
Sonnet writers must be cleaver
to finish their endeavors.
Dale
Sonnet writers must be cleaver
to finish their endeavors.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.

