Claws of the Beast

[Thoughtjotter]

Hi tj, welcome. It's suggested that to make sure posters critique the current edit that you label it and place it above the original in your opening post (just hit edit on the OP).

You might also want to check out the practice threads, there are some great explanations of meter and form.

And yes, you have to be quick to avoid cat editing.

Hope I got the edit in the right place know and thanks. I have been doing a crash course on writing poetry correctly. This is a wonderful site to learn from, THANKS to all who have made it possible for me to possibly do the impossible.
Thanks again,
Robert