Claws of the Beast
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(04-11-2014, 05:15 AM)Erthona Wrote:  Yes, it's called speed cause it gets you there quicker...if you are speaking of death. although that only comes through with the last line. So...if you have to tell me what the poem is about in the last line in order for me to know, why did I read the poem. Either your poem needs to be clearer, or you need to drop the last two lines.

Dale
Sir, may I respectfully disagree? A riddle-poem is worth reading. You guess the subject while it is hinted at, and the answer is revealed in the end. I find it perfect for unspeakable subjects, such as drugs, which this poem seems to be about.

I would write the last line as: Meth-heads methods of self-destruction: Claws of the Beast
*Warning: blatant tomfoolery above this line
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Messages In This Thread
Claws of the Beast - by Thoughtjotter - 04-11-2014, 03:19 AM
RE: Claws of the Beast - by Blake - 04-11-2014, 04:34 AM
RE: Claws of the Beast - by Thoughtjotter - 04-11-2014, 08:54 PM
RE: Claws of the Beast - by ChristopherSea - 04-11-2014, 09:19 PM
RE: Claws of the Beast - by Thoughtjotter - 04-13-2014, 09:44 PM
RE: Claws of the Beast - by Erthona - 04-11-2014, 05:15 AM
RE: Claws of the Beast - by kindofahippy - 04-11-2014, 05:34 AM
RE: Claws of the Beast - by Thoughtjotter - 04-11-2014, 09:22 PM
RE: Claws of the Beast - by ChristopherSea - 04-11-2014, 05:34 AM
RE: Claws of the Beast - by Thoughtjotter - 04-11-2014, 09:49 PM
RE: Claws of the Beast - by Erthona - 04-11-2014, 08:01 AM
RE: Claws of the Beast - by ellajam - 04-11-2014, 09:37 PM
RE: Claws of the Beast - by Thoughtjotter - 04-11-2014, 10:07 PM
RE: Claws of the Beast - by Erthona - 04-11-2014, 10:02 PM
RE: Claws of the Beast - by Thoughtjotter - 04-12-2014, 01:11 AM
RE: Claws of the Beast - by Mopkins - 04-11-2014, 10:53 PM



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